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This short tale is in response to " Silent Goodbye " by Drurie..
I have my own personal views on were this person is, but I would like you as the reader to imagine were they are.
Cloud watching.
LIFE..
I hated to say or explain to much.. I Like the reader to read this with there own meanings. personal feelings and points of view
P.S. ...
Ive just been reading through the " Tens " and id thought id try and write the shortest poem in there.
This is just for fun.
This short story was inspired by " Bad Dee " in the image gallery posted by LibbyParra.. Thxs to Libby and Dee.. Im working on the other two...
[Reviews - 2](Wordcount: 915 - Reads: 540) - Published:August 02, 2006
This is just a short poem i wrote
About what is was doing when England V Portugal today ( sat ) at noon.
Its not a deep epic, no tale of doom...
Hello, this is my first posting, Its not much of a tale. I just wanted to post something, see how this site works and say hi.
This is a brief...
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[Reviews - 1](Wordcount: 1508 - Reads: 507) - Published:June 27, 2006
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[Reviews - 3](Wordcount: 120 - Reads: 669) - Published:August 15, 2006
A poem about love, and how it can be full of passion and pain.
I really like that.. It drips full of passion.. Ive been there before and i get where your comming from.. And even if youve been lucky and havent felt like that it still comes across what youve been through..
My love, a tunnel to my core
A love that will forever want you more
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A love i wont recive, nevermore
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Strider! I really like the last line suggestion, too.
Thanks!
~Faye
A simple stroke of luck for one small person.
There is a danger that the story could get bogged down with you writting " discriptions more thoroughly "..
I liked it the first time i read it and i could even feel the breeze blowing her hair along with the tall grass. It flows well and seeing eveything from her piont of view ( both the child and the reader being not to sure what has happened as is going to happen next ) worked for me.
Being born and raised in England its storys like this that take me to diffrent parts of the world and diffrent times.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind review.
Thats exactly what I was trying to convay....HER feelings, HER point of view. Her small childlike mind and her take of what was going on. What SHE thought of her brother suddenly disappearing and so on.
A simple stroke of luck for one small person.
" ( both the child and the reader being not to sure what has happened as yet or is going to happen next ) worked for me."
Please dont review my review.
Its a poem of lost love.Ive been tossing it around in my head since ive jioned. Yes I know my grammer sucks.All comments welcome.
Thats a really touching bit of art.. And in the last few lines really got to me..
Nice piece of work..
Author's Response: Thanks mate. I\'m glad I did something right on this. Very kind of you to say so.
The children of one small school learn the history of modern dragons.
