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    I prefer to write 'HardSF' but, if fantasy is the way my creative cookie crumbles, who am I to argue ?
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    Tales of the Stormhawk - [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 1584 - Reads: 37) - Published:August 30, 2010

    This story tells the beginning of Felix Stormhawk's amazing adventures! It describes the first meeting between him and one of his most trusted crewmembers:...


    A fair start...


    A long way home - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 5271 - Reads: 37) - Published:June 27, 2010

    An ordinary girl finds out that the world is way stranger than she thought. After a mysterious warrior rescues her from the hands of a murderer, she...


    Whee !! Great start !!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.



    Anesthetic - starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 115 - Reads: 146) - Published:June 08, 2010

    The speaker remembers times spent in an artificial world.


    Elegant !!


    Eat the Demiurge! - [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 1205 - Reads: 20) - Published:May 28, 2010

    Creeping madness, the veil between this world and cosmic horror beyond telling is brushed aside. The first thing I've written in... three years? My...


    I'm not a great fan of the Cthu**u mythos, but I've read and enjoyed most of them, plus some of the Derleth tales and the better fanfic. IMHO, your intro is workable.

    FWIW, weird dreams often have a crazy logic of their own. Some of my best, uh, strangest notions are best described as 'Wake, Grabbing For Notebook'...

    It's when they recur and/or intrude on Reality that you gotta wonder...

    Now, does he wander into a car-boot sale or flea-market and stumble upon one of these books ??

    Author's Response:

    I haven't decided where he'll start finding journals, or if they'll even figure into this story. I do plan on the assembled characters finding a spellbook at the end, though.

    I imagine the journals (while they do exist) are extremely rare and either belong to wealthy collectors or cultists waiting for the stars to align.



    The Flowers of Ran - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
    (Wordcount: 4576 - Reads: 273) - Published:July 01, 2010

    A spy and an assassin seek to maintain stability in the trouble Star Empire of Ran.


    Nicely written ! You describe the puppet-master, the power behind the throne, very well.

    Naturally, all hangs by a thread of ignorance: If people cross-check their info, entire edifice collapses...


    The Construct - starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 1910 - Reads: 36) - Published:May 24, 2010

    In the year 2053, a new way of instant transportation has been invented. Nanotechnology allows people to travel all around the world in the blink of...


    Nice to see a new 'teleport' tale -- Proves Niven & Co didn't work out the seam back in the 20th century !!

    I daren't comment on dialogue attribution, but I would ask for spaced paragraphs.


    The Crimson Void - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 6175 - Reads: 57) - Published:March 29, 2010

    When a strange man comes into Elizabeth's bookshop looking for a rare book, little does she realise that she will soon be dragged into a world of ritual...


    Whooo!! That's an atmospheric start !!
    More, please ?

    ps: I'd be rummaging two shelves further along, evincing quiet glee as I found a well-thumbed, mildew-spotted book of Engineering Mechanisms from 1918 to complement an as-new Kempe on 'Living Underground'...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! This hasn't been an easy book to start, since it all has to be 'normal' and the weirdness creep in slowly... needless to say, I don't do 'normal' very often.

    I have to admit that the whole 'old tome of forbidden, ancient lore' is definitely something I daydream about - I'm thinking something Necronomicon-y... XD



    Batman: Year One CH 1 - starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 5429 - Reads: 14) - Published:March 18, 2010

    The city of Gotham awakes to a new era


    I'm not a fan of the Batman canon, so can just read it as it comes.

    I like the tale so far.

    ps: Give your spiel chequer a kick ?


    Trebreh - starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 6664 - Reads: 126) - Published:June 17, 2010

    What an insane world this is, I thought, and as I looked out at the waves that were lapping mildly at the shore, I couldn't help but shake...


    I like it.
    IMHO, writing combat scenes is as hard as crafting tight verse, and you've done well.

    ps: course / coarse animal hair.

    Author's Response:

    thx! IMHO? and yeah i always get that wrong



    Post-Science, a Virtual Debate - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 3117 - Reads: 182) - Published:February 27, 2010

    In the future science may become obsolete as cybernetics, the net, and AI outpace the peer review process of testing hypothesis by empirical means.


    Nice write-up !

    I'll still have to read it again when my headache's gone away...

    FWIW, 'research' by multi-dimensional mapping of data and seeking patterns there-in is not new. Automated testing with multiple variables can generate far more data than a person can hope to comprehend, while automatic pattern recognition plus 'genetic algorithms' can home in on a 'sweet spot' solution. That's just shy of a 'brute force' approach, but may throw up unexpected wonders.

    Of course, the result may only be as good as the model, and in-vivo testing then clinical trials *must* complement 'in-vitro' testing...


    Why the Duchess Fainted - starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 624 - Reads: 154) - Published:January 18, 2010

    Four ladies of the court discuss the different types of scandal.


    ROFL !!

    Author's Response:

    :-)



    Endless Night - starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 10850 - Reads: 34) - Published:January 18, 2010

    Askura has lost its Queen, who guards the entrance to the Underworld. The fate of Askura now lies within the hands of its new, reluctant guardian.

     

    Edited...


    More, please ??

    Author's Response:

    There will be more. Working on the 3rd chapter now.



    Under the Suns of Paradise - starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 22166 - Reads: 32) - Published:January 14, 2010

    On Paradise people farm the dangerous plants like cattle controlling them and keeping the jungle out with electric fences and domes, but something is...


    Triffids !! Triffids !!

    Daleks scared me, but Wyndam's Triffids terrified me-- They could seed 'thistle-down', you see, then strike from any hedge-row, strike for the eyes...

    Some rough patches, especially introducing the 'Outpost', but a fascinating eco-system, with plausible, self-consistent tech and a pending SolarMax plus obligate roving psycho...

    Lovely stuff !!

    ps: ariel / aerial

    Author's Response:

    Its still an expanding idea, lots to look at and research, and i have basically just banged it out over the past week or so having been snowed in :) I will take another look at it. Thanks alot for reading and taking the time to give me your thoughts.



    Wolf Heart - starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 4824 - Reads: 44) - Published:January 25, 2010

    A young veternarian is more than she seems and so is her newest patient.


    More, please ??


    Morlock Winter - starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 22659 - Reads: 45) - Published:December 30, 2009

    A team of 'Rangers,' state-sponsered scavengers, navigate the dangerous, irradiated seas of post-apocalyptic fame. Or, they will, if I ever finish writing...


    Sure is dystopic...

    Sounds like the episode of Deadwood I tried to sit through, which probably makes it realistic...


    Amber Lake Hospital - [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 11007 - Reads: 52) - Published:July 09, 2010

    Amber Lake Hospital...an asylum and prison rolled up all into one and funded by an unknown organization of people. The year is 1999, the month is October...


    So far, so good...

    I've seen places like that after they've been re-purposed to mainstream-- But, somehow, their ghosts' screams linger...

    Remind M to take his pipe ?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Michael does take his pipe back in the next chapter. XD



    Prodigy - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 211 - Reads: 213) - Published:December 26, 2009
    A poem I just wrote, hope you like it.
    Nicely done !!

    Author's Response: Thanks :P


    assassins of Isis - starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 371 - Reads: 31) - Published:December 20, 2009

    fantasy world where various cults are on the brink of war, the theft of one stauette by an unclanned threatens to shatter the uneasy peace.


    That's a very nasty rat-trap...

    Also primes readers for the level / style of magic in that society...

    Nice pace, too.
    Will read even better after spiel-chequer recovers from the Christmas Pud...
    ;-)


    The Seven Games that Hesson Played - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 6069 - Reads: 435) - Published:February 10, 2010

    A mysterious figures plays a series of deadly games with a young boy.


    I think Kilo would give the legendary Sphinx a run for her money...

    Author's Response:

    Kilo is a tricky little minx but she has a purpose behind it all.



    The Seven Games that Hesson Played - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 6069 - Reads: 435) - Published:February 10, 2010

    A mysterious figures plays a series of deadly games with a young boy.


    Shiver...


    Flames of Defeat - [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 1520 - Reads: 35) - Published:November 18, 2009

    Just a draft of a backstory on a series im going to be writing. Just tells a little bit of where their coming from and the event that made do the things...


    Shiver...


    The Gauntlet of Glowar - starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 3504 - Reads: 222) - Published:October 04, 2009

    Ryvor makes a deal with a spirit-possessed artifact. But is it worth the price?


    Neat !!


    Contrast - [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 1566 - Reads: 204) - Published:September 26, 2009

    An artist runs into a Walking God but doesn't get exactly what he was after...

    (This is the second introduction story to the Godstars. It is...


    Never met a Genuine Artists' Muse in the daytime ! Neat !!


    Touch - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 26633 - Reads: 623) - Published:September 09, 2009

    Daniel Krane recieves a letter from his astranged father that leads him back into his own past and onto a new future.


    Lovely !!

    Reads like a Classic 'Golden Age' SF Tale !!

    Thank You !!


    Collection Agency - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 5477 - Reads: 175) - Published:September 09, 2009

    A lowly employe of the Collection Agency finds himself in a sticky situation.


    Neat !

    And, as some-one who's sat through a lot of Dr Who time-loops and paradox stuff, nicely done !


    Stardial - [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 2013 - Reads: 158) - Published:September 09, 2009

    A Walking Warrior finds refuge in a mountain monastary during troubled times.


    Neat !

    Wow, they must have really, really dark skies. I've only seen Milky Way *once*...

    Um, how does the StarDial and its fixed holes deals with seasons ??

    Author's Response:

    I figured the monks would chose a location for the Stardial where starlight was strongest, someplace away from civilization and where seasonal weather wouldn't affect them very much.



    The Third Layer - starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 993 - Reads: 240) - Published:August 24, 2009

    As the world rips itself apart before him, bringing his life into utter chaos Yolan struggles to save the world while barely being able to...


    Ch#1: So far, so good.

    Um, watch the baulky spiel-chequer and continuity...

    Author's Response:

    What do you mean by continuity?



    Extractor (Prelim. Working Title) - [Reviews - 1]
    (Wordcount: 1984 - Reads: 38) - Published:August 17, 2009

    A dystopian world, maybe next year, maybe centuries from now. The world is a different place, yet not much has changed. Beggars roam the streets, children...


    CH#1: So far, so good.

    I know you'll tweak it recursively, so that's factored in, too...


    Bishop's Conspiracy - starstar [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 12880 - Reads: 90) - Published:August 18, 2009

    Mercedes Deville and Morgan Starr are nearly at the end of their rope. Not only were they not paid for the last job. They had managed to have their...


    Ch#1 + 2... So far, so good. More, please ?



    Author's Response:

    thanks have more posted now



    Some thought - starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
    (Wordcount: 5322 - Reads: 759) - Published:July 28, 2009

    What I do during my work day is none of my boss' business


    ROFL !!

    Gah !! I had paper-work like that ! Hundreds of pages per HPLC re-certification, checking case-reference, page sequence and math, sign and date, sign and date, sign and date...

    If left severely alone, I could do three or four a day during 're-cert' season. Aye. If the money and benefits weren't so good...



    The Surrender - starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
    (Wordcount: 3108 - Reads: 206) - Published:June 23, 2009

    The forces of earth have to surrender to an alien race, but the man forced to sign the treaty has to come to terms with its one horrifying condition.


    Scary and, IMHO, very well written.

    IIRC, this is called a 'Devil's Alternative'...

    Um, I hope those slugs are going very far, very fast because HomoSap Astronauticus is so gonna put salt on their tails...



    Gone - starstarstar [Reviews - 2]
    (Wordcount: 3388 - Reads: 1673) - Published:January 22, 2008

    Journal entrys of some one who wakes up and everyone is gone except her and her 8mo old daughter.


    Up to #10: So far, so good. I like the way her habits lie in ambush. I like the way she's muddlin' through. Real, not a comic-book Ms. Survivalist. I'm wondering what is her friend Laura's problem, and why she didn't answer her phone...

    More, please ??


My Awards

Awards Showcase - 1 Awards
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Name: 9/2009 20,000 Word Story
Winner of the September 2009 20,000 word story contest.
Issue time: 10-01-2009 10:05 AM
Issue reason: Winner of the 20,000 word story contest.

The Orloc of Robur by Nik

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